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MSS - Another Trailer!

5 years ago194 words

Carrying on from the previous post, here's another, improved video draft of the trailer, which has most of the structure in place! Again, I'd very much appreciate feedback; it's been helpful so far!

Instead of talking about it, I'll link to the video and let it speak for itself. Again, it's not on YouTube because it's not done yet:

∞ This is a link! ∞

I've got plenty of thoughts about it, but I want to see if they're the sorts of things that someone other than myself might notice or take issue with, so your thoughts are valuable here!

Sound makes an enormous difference to how things like this are perceived, so since there isn't any, it's definitely less effective than it would be with an appropriate soundtrack. Since I'll need to design one around the structure and length though, it's best to make sure that's okay before composing anything.



Oh, actually, ugh, I noticed a bug while assembling this, which I'll need to address and then re-record a couple of clips. The glyph on Memody's forehead disappears when she lies or sits down! How annoying!